Discussion in 'Lifestyle' started by DRAIGON, Aug 6, 2008.
don't like the composition.. feel like you should go lower on her body w/ where you placed her in the frame.. lighting looks ok though.
people no longer smile when they get their pics done
Lighting is too flat.
I like teh dramatic lighting of the first pic. But I like the overall feel of the second pic much more. not sure on the scond pic if you did and dodging of the eyes but it appears teh give the eyes bright blue rings. Either that, or you just have very bright blue eyes
I adjusted eyes. Thats all in that pic. Oh and removed some shine from teeth.
nevermind, now i see why you cropped so high on the first shot.
good lighting, fits the mood of her... looks like it could be one of the pics on those anti abortion billboards.... only thing I'd do to improve it is add some kind of separation from the BG.. whether that's a rim light, or a hair light is your call.
you need a more attractive subject
I know. This is just for a lighting assignment