Discussion in 'Lifestyle' started by ThexToddster, Feb 23, 2008.
Did a shoot last night. Looking for some serious CC. Enjoy.
She should assume a pose that doesn't highlight her ribs. A little more light in the eyes would have been nice too.
Her head looks all distorted, almost like it's a huge alien head.
The photo itself is about a 3 out of 10. While you have all of the right elements to make a successful cock teasing image, you didn't execute.
if you could throw the back drop just slightly out of focus past the Lambo would really make them pop
Her ribs sticking out on the right are creepy, as is the lack of fill causing her head to have a strange alien shape.
and the rest of the pic is all.... strange?
White lambo, with the front of the bumper cut off, with the 'hostility' sticker highlighted, stuck in the corner of a warehouse with orange metal shelves filled with cardboard boxes? Not to mention, the boxes/wall/shelves are lit just as bright as the car and model, which immedietly makes me stare at them trying to figure out the connection...
madd wide angle distortion on her head. unflattering pose. and warehouse photos generally do better without a girl. and your watermark is circa beginning of the internet
The ribs and head look weird with the lighting. Car could use more lighting.
would still hit though
Location, light on her face, can't really see much of the car.
And why is she getting ready to pull down her undies? Porn star?
where are the nudes? and don't say you didn't have a camera
hey I'm a faggot
hate hate hate
Ribs like woah, bad crop very crampt, subject is neither the car or the girl, background is distracting, she looks almost pasted in, hood is blown.
its papyrus you fag
get it right
wow goes to show even people with 100k+ to blow on a car can have no taste and put shitty vinyl graphics on their car
Thanks for those who offered some serious critique. I appreciate it and I'll be sure to fix it.
This was the situation.
I was in Big Bear when I got a call from Hostility Clothing, saying they needed me right away to do this shoot and to come do it as soon as possible. I drove straight home, grabbed my gear and went to their warehouse.
I get there and they had the car exactly where they wanted it and they said they wanted the boxes, (their product) as the background. I hated it and asked them if we could move the car somewhere else, but it didn’t happen. I didn’t have much room to use a longer lens, so I used the wide angle. I didn’t notice the distortion much last night, since I just did a quick edit to throw it online to get some feedback so I could really edit the shots.
I have a lot of other shots, but I posted this one so some of you guys could check out the chick and give some helpful CC. But I forgot, this is offtopic, where everyone is a millionaire and date supermodels. I'll try to not shoot alien looking women with sharp elbows next time.
oh and Spurious, since everything was wrong with my shot and I should do a reshoot, I'm sure you can post up some examples of your work so I can see how it's really done.
Next time, offer simple CC and leave it at that. Leave the nonsense you posted above for offtopic. It has no place here and only makes you look like a little worthless cocksucker.
Just post up some sample work when you're ready champ.
I was hoping you wouldn't take it personally. It was overdone to the point of absurdity for a reason. But whatever, guess it's time to go suck some cocks.
I'm pretty sure you made his pussy bleed a little
Would've been nice if you could see more of bottom of the lambo
i thought it was pretty much spot on. please c&c any photos of mine like that, spurious..
Dude, Im totally fucking hungover, and work is terrible right now. I want to shoot myself and I didnt know if you were being serious, so I responded.
It always bleeds
I have a lot of different shots showing everything, I just need to get around to editing them.
Some lighting/color adjustments would be better
Definately too much of a hot spot on the cars hood, its really washed out compared to the rest of the car