A&P go easy on me guys

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no editing done to them, used flash with a shoot through


for the headshots i just had her shade herself with the umbrella in direct sunlight

 

Gotta work on the posing. Otherwise these aren't bad at all. The last three are the best.

 

thanks man


im gonna try to setup another shoot with her, it was so much fun

 

this might be the best stuff you've posted.

You are safe to crank up the power on the flash a little too.

Now you gotta start with the post processing...

 

thanks man

 

the butterface is overwhelming.

But to give some C&C... the first shot needs more light on her body. They all seem slightly OOF to me. They could be a little sharper.

 

im shooting with a 10D and a 28-105, is that combo known for being OOF?

i notice the images are sharper when i shoot with my tokina lens, should i get rid of the 28-105?

or upgrade the whole setup all together?

 

Don't shoot at f/9