thanks manGotta work on the posing. Otherwise these aren't bad at all. The last three are the best.
thanks manthis might be the best stuff you've posted.
You are safe to crank up the power on the flash a little too.
Now you gotta start with the post processing...
im shooting with a 10D and a 28-105, is that combo known for being OOF?the butterface is overwhelming.
But to give some C&C... the first shot needs more light on her body. They all seem slightly OOF to me. They could be a little sharper.