Discussion in 'Lifestyle' started by jared_IRL, Jan 21, 2009.
playing with this shot this morning, need more eyes on it.
i think its a great shot, my noob eyes cant see anything to improve upon
her head looks overly huge. other than that, I dig it. Is this the chick that wanted in last minute from your headshot thread?
I thought her head looked a little big too... Not sure why..
and yeah, that's her.
What he said.
To me it looks great.
BTW: I love your work.
i think its the angle her head is at, but it looks a little big. other than that, its a great shot
she was leaning forward?
do you have a picture where she isn't making the :O: face? The more I look at her face the awkward it feels for 'me'
new edit - smaller head:
enjoyable shot...good execution, good balance of light/dark. and she's pleasing to look at
clean up the facial tones a little. some slight blotchiness on her cheek and forehead.
if you look at some of the mansfield examples from the period, these nightclub shots were strong, sultry but always feminine. the epitome of female fuckableness, set just slightly above.
smaller head ftw. great shot broseph
Very nicely done! My only minor issue is the cropping/framing. She's looking off the side of the frame so I'd like to see more room on the right. Otherwise, great job!!
head/face looks like it's chopped on there
First: Nice shot, Man. You're really coming into your own.
1) The lighting ratio. I would much more prefer that she was a bit brighter – 1/2 stop maybe – than the band. She's the subject.
2) I really do not like that she facing out of frame. Eyes follow eyes. So in this case, my eyes go to hers and then off the image.
i am really diggin your film noir stuff, makes me want to try it so bad.
Agree with all of this!
I like the fact that he broke this rule, and this picture works with that rule broken.
. The mouth thing looks like someone yelled "freeze" while she was talking. Other than that it's great.
makes me envision an audience outside of the frame out in the darkness.
looks good, but doesn't look like she's singing. looks like she's just holding her mouth open