ART Made a new blog entry, I would like your critque

YourMomOnRyeBun

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Can you PLEASE proof read what you wrote (on the blog) and fix all the grammer errors, omitted words, spelling errors, etc. Makes reading it painful...
 

YourMomOnRyeBun

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Don't take this the wrong way...I don't mean it in a mean spirited way...

What is the purpose of the blog?

Educate people? Lure people to your photography site?
 
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Don't take this the wrong way...I don't mean it in a mean spirited way...

What is the purpose of the blog?

Educate people? Lure people to your photography site?

well generally It was just a photoblog, a place to put what I felt like showcasing, these days since I just moved im not taking that many photos, so i decided to write a bit.
 

YourMomOnRyeBun

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The layout is nice and clean.

If you wanted to put in the extra work, a picture of your gear would be nice with the link to purchase each item.

You're using amazon links anyway...
Just an idea.

Your copyright says 2010

Too much empty white space at the top...fill that in with something.

I like the picture on the main page. EDU on how you made that might be a cool post to read...?
 

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Don't take this the wrong way...I don't mean it in a mean spirited way...

What is the purpose of the blog?

Educate people? Lure people to your photography site?
fuck yeah. i jsut write random shit on my blog with amazon links to see if people actually buy shit through my affiliate links

:rofl:

i should probably put more effort into it, though.
 
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SenenCito

SenenCito

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The layout is nice and clean.

If you wanted to put in the extra work, a picture of your gear would be nice with the link to purchase each item.

You're using amazon links anyway...
Just an idea.

Your copyright says 2010

Too much empty white space at the top...fill that in with something.

I like the picture on the main page. EDU on how you made that might be a cool post to read...?


OK those are very valid things, ill start working on them tomorrow. Quite a few things I hadn't noticed.

Which picture do you mean?
 

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