A&P New Watermark

I think this is better than the old one....any suggestions to tweak it?



Before:



After:

 

10000x better

 

looks a lot better

 

While I'll agree it's better, it still doesn't cut it.

 

when i was a little kid, just getting into design i showed my mom the first thing i ever made in photoshop. she looked at for about a second and said, "why have text if you cant read it?" That was the best bit of advice i ever got.

anyways, now i ask myself that every time i put text on anything.

back to your watermark, why not try to cut the C2008 out of the bar and do the same with the jcerone

 

^^^ Great advice!

Or he could just delete it and start all over.

 

better, and similar to mine w/ less suckage.

 

not bad

 

those are horrible

 

Looks like 90% better, I would just make it a little smaller

 

you mean just cut those letters out to be completely transparent to show the photo?

I think that is a good idea

 

thanks everyone else for the comments, i'll throw together another version in a few days.

 

Here is an example of a watermark...its my cousins. Very simple.

I know you are trying to be creative, but i am giving you an idea...make it simple.

 

^not the biggest fan of that

 

that is horrible.

 

MUCH gooder.

here's mine...

 

I like it ok, but make it a little transparent.

 

okay, i will put my two cents in, take it or leave it...

change the gray text to a darker gray. decrease opacity of the bar just bit more. and i would suggest moving it off the very bottom. maybe move it up just slightly so that some of the picture is underneath where the water mark lays. also i think if you did a horizontal stripe with a darker gray on either the top or bottom of the text it would make it look a lot better. just my personal opinion. its a little too plain and looks slapped on there. i really didn't like your old one at all though. when i first saw your pictures i though to myself, "damn this guy sure does think a lot of himself" when i saw the billboard at the bottom.

 

This seems more branding then a watermark. Girth I would suggest fixing the kerning on yours, it seems way to cramped.

 

Much better, although I think it's too big.

 

I'm guessing that was intentional.

 

Make sure I can read what your watermark says. It's pointless if no one can read it or find you from it.

 

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we practically have the same watermark

 

I don't know what yours looks like.