Discussion in 'Lifestyle' started by xenon supra, Nov 20, 2008.
I think this is better than the old one....any suggestions to tweak it?
looks a lot better
While I'll agree it's better, it still doesn't cut it.
when i was a little kid, just getting into design i showed my mom the first thing i ever made in photoshop. she looked at for about a second and said, "why have text if you cant read it?" That was the best bit of advice i ever got.
anyways, now i ask myself that every time i put text on anything.
back to your watermark, why not try to cut the C2008 out of the bar and do the same with the jcerone
^^^ Great advice!
Or he could just delete it and start all over.
better, and similar to mine w/ less suckage.
those are horrible
Looks like 90% better, I would just make it a little smaller
you mean just cut those letters out to be completely transparent to show the photo?
I think that is a good idea
thanks everyone else for the comments, i'll throw together another version in a few days.
Here is an example of a watermark...its my cousins. Very simple.
I know you are trying to be creative, but i am giving you an idea...make it simple.
^not the biggest fan of that
that is horrible.
I like it ok, but make it a little transparent.
okay, i will put my two cents in, take it or leave it...
change the gray text to a darker gray. decrease opacity of the bar just bit more. and i would suggest moving it off the very bottom. maybe move it up just slightly so that some of the picture is underneath where the water mark lays. also i think if you did a horizontal stripe with a darker gray on either the top or bottom of the text it would make it look a lot better. just my personal opinion. its a little too plain and looks slapped on there. i really didn't like your old one at all though. when i first saw your pictures i though to myself, "damn this guy sure does think a lot of himself" when i saw the billboard at the bottom.
This seems more branding then a watermark. Girth I would suggest fixing the kerning on yours, it seems way to cramped.
Much better, although I think it's too big.
I'm guessing that was intentional.
Make sure I can read what your watermark says. It's pointless if no one can read it or find you from it.
we practically have the same watermark
I don't know what yours looks like.