ART New Watermark

[xenon supra]

I think this is better than the old one....any suggestions to tweak it?

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After:

 

[Kirk Hinrich]

10000x better

 

[tenxia]

looks a lot better

 

[f/2.8L]

While I'll agree it's better, it still doesn't cut it.

 

[quid]

when i was a little kid, just getting into design i showed my mom the first thing i ever made in photoshop. she looked at for about a second and said, "why have text if you cant read it?" That was the best bit of advice i ever got.

anyways, now i ask myself that every time i put text on anything.

back to your watermark, why not try to cut the C2008 out of the bar and do the same with the jcerone

 

[f/2.8L]

^^^ Great advice!

Or he could just delete it and start all over.

 

[Enigma]

better, and similar to mine w/ less suckage.

 

[legendr34]

not bad

 

[Gvidon]

those are horrible

 

[tehshocker]

Looks like 90% better, I would just make it a little smaller

 

[xenon supra]

back to your watermark, why not try to cut the C2008 out of the bar and do the same with the jcerone

you mean just cut those letters out to be completely transparent to show the photo?

I think that is a good idea

 

[xenon supra]

thanks everyone else for the comments, i'll throw together another version in a few days.

 

[Gvidon]

Here is an example of a watermark...its my cousins. Very simple.

I know you are trying to be creative, but i am giving you an idea...make it simple.

 

[xenon supra]

^not the biggest fan of that

 

[Enigma]

that is horrible.

 

[Girth]

MUCH gooder.

here's mine...

 

[f/2.8L]

I like it ok, but make it a little transparent.

 

[Essence]

okay, i will put my two cents in, take it or leave it...

change the gray text to a darker gray. decrease opacity of the bar just bit more. and i would suggest moving it off the very bottom. maybe move it up just slightly so that some of the picture is underneath where the water mark lays. also i think if you did a horizontal stripe with a darker gray on either the top or bottom of the text it would make it look a lot better. just my personal opinion. its a little too plain and looks slapped on there. i really didn't like your old one at all though. when i first saw your pictures i though to myself, "damn this guy sure does think a lot of himself" when i saw the billboard at the bottom.

 

[W.Shatner]

This seems more branding then a watermark. Girth I would suggest fixing the kerning on yours, it seems way to cramped.

 

[Smeghead]

Much better, although I think it's too big.

 

[f/2.8L]

Girth I would suggest fixing the kerning on yours, it seems way to cramped.

I'm guessing that was intentional.

 

[FusionZ06]

Make sure I can read what your watermark says. It's pointless if no one can read it or find you from it.

 

[iDrive]

While I'll agree it's better, it still doesn't cut it.

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[iDrive]

MUCH gooder.

here's mine...

we practically have the same watermark

 

[Girth]

we practically have the same watermark

I don't know what yours looks like.