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di3soft

Went to Glenco beach yesterday, it was a little gloomy but the weather was nice. Tell me what you think. unlike some people if you think they suck tell me and tell me how to fix it.


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SLED

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1st one isn't bad, but I think I'd rather see a horizontal shot with more of the ocean. There isn't much detail above the subject. Your conversion to B&W looks meh. Needs more cloud detail in the sky.

2nd: I can't get past the distraction of the wooden hand rail in front of the subject.
 
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SLED said:
1st one isn't bad, but I think I'd rather see a horizontal shot with more of the ocean. There isn't much detail above the subject. Your conversion to B&W looks meh. Needs more cloud detail in the sky.

2nd: I can't get past the distraction of the wooden hand rail in front of the subject.

thanks :bigthumb:, yea in the first one, the sky had nearly no clouds in it and it was really gloomy, second one I tried several positions but I wantesd the hammock and some rocks in the picture so this is the best one I could get at that spot.
 
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plus whats a good way to convert in PS to B&W when I do BW I usually shoot in it.
 

e.pie

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SLED said:
1st one isn't bad, but I think I'd rather see a horizontal shot with more of the ocean. There isn't much detail above the subject. Your conversion to B&W looks meh. Needs more cloud detail in the sky.

2nd: I can't get past the distraction of the wooden hand rail in front of the subject.
agreed
 
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GregFarz78 said:
I agree 1st one would've been cool as a landscape

attractive girl though :bigthumb:


that she is, cool as hell too, I was just like sit here look that way so forth so forth never once questioned me once. id love to date her
 
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This is from the same time, I positioned the camera set everything just had her push the shutter, shot with a 60mm prime. added her sig to it cause she took it i guess.
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EDIT: yes i know the smoking must go
 
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dano said:
Nudes?

And I agree, the first shot should be horizontal. Probably too late to fix that now though.


will probably go back on a nicer sunnier day and do a few more, and no, no nudes. sorry folks
 
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GregFarz78 said:
not to sound gay or anything but you could probably hit that :o

I know, I can but I have grown out of the hit and run, I would rather date her.

flame suit on :noes:
 

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